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lundi, novembre 12, 2007

Monday poetry train - Fallen angel


What is that thing/Qu'est-ce cette chose
Lying on the ground/Étendue sur le sol
With feather twirling/Des plumes virvollent
In the haze that suround him/ Dans cette brume qui l'entourent
Fold into himself/ Replier sur lui-même
With nothing to hide/ Ne cachant rien
Is he my fallen angel/ Est-il mon ange déchu
That came to protect me/ Venu me protéger
From the darkness that keep surounding me/ De la noiceur qui m'entoure
With his spear/ De son épée
Would he kill/ Pourra-t-il tuer
The demons that have tried/ Les démons qui essaient
To steal my soul / De voler mon âme
And tear my skin/ Et déchirer ma peau
Will he with his wings/ Pourra-t-il de ses ailes
Burry me/M'ensevelier
So there would be/ Pour qu'il n'y ait
Only the softness/ Que la douceur
Of his chest/De son buste

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12 Comments:

  • At 7:45 p.m., Blogger julia said…

    'Will he with his wings/ Pourra-t-il de ses ailes
    Bury me/M'ensevelier
    So there would be/ Pour qu'il n'y ait
    Only the softness/ Que la douceur
    Of his chest/De son buste'

    Ooo, Jill! Love these last lines! I can feel that burying.

     
  • At 8:15 p.m., Blogger Rhian said…

    you JUST wrote this didn't you? LIke today. Damn wench. That's some talent you have. Beautiful.

     
  • At 8:48 p.m., Blogger Jill said…

    Julia, who is capturing you under his wings??

    Rhian, yes I did. I only take inspiration from everything that I see and hear around me... I have to thank Lisa again for posting that beautiful picture!!

     
  • At 9:06 p.m., Blogger julia said…

    Jill - who else but my handsome honey, Brad?

     
  • At 9:40 p.m., Blogger Ann said…

    Beautiful poem, just lovely.

     
  • At 12:20 a.m., Blogger Roscoe James said…

    Muy bien. Bravo! Me gusta. Otra! Otra!

     
  • At 12:30 a.m., Anonymous Missy said…

    Wow! Awesome poem! Compelling.

     
  • At 6:07 a.m., Anonymous gautami tripathy said…

    The last few lines have a great impact. One feels cold suddenly after reading that.

     
  • At 3:08 p.m., Blogger Jill said…

    Julia, take advantage of it!!

    Ann, thank!

    Roscoe, I know that you said congratulation, but I don't speak other language than french and english!!

    Missy, it was inspired by the picture above...

    Gautami, go find someone to get you under his/her wings... Or find your fallen angel!!

     
  • At 9:24 p.m., Blogger Y said…

    ohhhhhhh i so love this one. nicely done Jill!

     
  • At 10:42 p.m., Blogger STAK said…

    nifty!.........i agree with julia about that last stanza.....

     
  • At 10:49 p.m., Blogger Jill said…

    Y, good to see you back around!!

    Stak, you want to be buried too??

     

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