Monday poetry train - Fallen angel
What is that thing/Qu'est-ce cette chose
Lying on the ground/Étendue sur le sol
With feather twirling/Des plumes virvollent
In the haze that suround him/ Dans cette brume qui l'entourent
Fold into himself/ Replier sur lui-même
With nothing to hide/ Ne cachant rien
Is he my fallen angel/ Est-il mon ange déchu
That came to protect me/ Venu me protéger
From the darkness that keep surounding me/ De la noiceur qui m'entoure
With his spear/ De son épée
Would he kill/ Pourra-t-il tuer
The demons that have tried/ Les démons qui essaient
To steal my soul / De voler mon âme
And tear my skin/ Et déchirer ma peau
Will he with his wings/ Pourra-t-il de ses ailes
Burry me/M'ensevelier
So there would be/ Pour qu'il n'y ait
Only the softness/ Que la douceur
Of his chest/De son buste
Lying on the ground/Étendue sur le sol
With feather twirling/Des plumes virvollent
In the haze that suround him/ Dans cette brume qui l'entourent
Fold into himself/ Replier sur lui-même
With nothing to hide/ Ne cachant rien
Is he my fallen angel/ Est-il mon ange déchu
That came to protect me/ Venu me protéger
From the darkness that keep surounding me/ De la noiceur qui m'entoure
With his spear/ De son épée
Would he kill/ Pourra-t-il tuer
The demons that have tried/ Les démons qui essaient
To steal my soul / De voler mon âme
And tear my skin/ Et déchirer ma peau
Will he with his wings/ Pourra-t-il de ses ailes
Burry me/M'ensevelier
So there would be/ Pour qu'il n'y ait
Only the softness/ Que la douceur
Of his chest/De son buste
Libellés : Monday Poetry Train, poem, poème
12 Comments:
At 7:45 p.m., Julia Phillips Smith said…
'Will he with his wings/ Pourra-t-il de ses ailes
Bury me/M'ensevelier
So there would be/ Pour qu'il n'y ait
Only the softness/ Que la douceur
Of his chest/De son buste'
Ooo, Jill! Love these last lines! I can feel that burying.
At 8:15 p.m., Rhian said…
you JUST wrote this didn't you? LIke today. Damn wench. That's some talent you have. Beautiful.
At 8:48 p.m., Jill said…
Julia, who is capturing you under his wings??
Rhian, yes I did. I only take inspiration from everything that I see and hear around me... I have to thank Lisa again for posting that beautiful picture!!
At 9:06 p.m., Julia Phillips Smith said…
Jill - who else but my handsome honey, Brad?
At 9:40 p.m., Ann said…
Beautiful poem, just lovely.
At 12:20 a.m., Roscoe James said…
Muy bien. Bravo! Me gusta. Otra! Otra!
At 12:30 a.m., Anonyme said…
Wow! Awesome poem! Compelling.
At 6:07 a.m., Anonyme said…
The last few lines have a great impact. One feels cold suddenly after reading that.
At 3:08 p.m., Jill said…
Julia, take advantage of it!!
Ann, thank!
Roscoe, I know that you said congratulation, but I don't speak other language than french and english!!
Missy, it was inspired by the picture above...
Gautami, go find someone to get you under his/her wings... Or find your fallen angel!!
At 9:24 p.m., Y said…
ohhhhhhh i so love this one. nicely done Jill!
At 10:42 p.m., STAK said…
nifty!.........i agree with julia about that last stanza.....
At 10:49 p.m., Jill said…
Y, good to see you back around!!
Stak, you want to be buried too??
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