Monday poetry train - Rhume/Cold
Je hais ce sentiment / I hate that feeling
D,être prise dans mon propre corps / Of being trapped in my own body
De sentir ces orgarnes trop ardement / To be feeling the organs too much
D'avoir perdu le contrôle / To have lost control
DE sentir l'énergie / To feel the energy
Sortir peu à peu / Slipping little by little
De sentir l'air /To feel air
Qui devient tempête / Become a rage
Dans un corp / In a body
Qui semblait calme / That seems calm
L'instant d'avant /The moment before
Je veux respirer la vie / I want to breath life
Mais au contraire / But instead
Je semble la vomir / I feel like throwing it up
Mon repos n'est plus calme / My rest is not calm
Interrompu par des subresauts /Interrupt by vaults
Pour l'instant /For the moment
Je n'attends que le moment / I only wait for
Ou je pourrai respirer à pleins poumons /When I could breath fully
Et dire aurevoir / And say goodbye
À ce maudit rhume/ To this damn cold
D,être prise dans mon propre corps / Of being trapped in my own body
De sentir ces orgarnes trop ardement / To be feeling the organs too much
D'avoir perdu le contrôle / To have lost control
DE sentir l'énergie / To feel the energy
Sortir peu à peu / Slipping little by little
De sentir l'air /To feel air
Qui devient tempête / Become a rage
Dans un corp / In a body
Qui semblait calme / That seems calm
L'instant d'avant /The moment before
Je veux respirer la vie / I want to breath life
Mais au contraire / But instead
Je semble la vomir / I feel like throwing it up
Mon repos n'est plus calme / My rest is not calm
Interrompu par des subresauts /Interrupt by vaults
Pour l'instant /For the moment
Je n'attends que le moment / I only wait for
Ou je pourrai respirer à pleins poumons /When I could breath fully
Et dire aurevoir / And say goodbye
À ce maudit rhume/ To this damn cold
Libellés : Monday Poetry Train, poem, poème
18 Comments:
At 6:23 p.m., Rhian said…
LOL!! oh Jill - this is funny and clever! Reminds me a little of that one poem Rhet posted a while back about the flu - without all the innuendos of course!
At 1:17 a.m., Julia Phillips Smith said…
This is a rather meditative poem about a state of being so often referred to as 'common', but every cold wages its own war. My favorie lines:
'L'instant d'avant /The moment before
Je veux respirer la vie / I want to breath life
Mais au contraire / But instead
Je semble la vomir / I feel like throwing it up'
At 5:54 a.m., Anonyme said…
You made my day!! I say similarly opposite stuff for the never-ending summer!
At 9:02 a.m., paisley said…
girl.. and i had you in a full blown maniacal rage there before that last line!!!! excellent!!!!
At 10:02 a.m., Jill said…
Rhian, funny and clever, that is me!! But I don't think I would take the other part of your comment in consideration!!
Julia, I really do fight one hell of a war each I get a cold!!
Gautami, I made your day!!! HEy!!
Pasley, me, in a rage? I think it is one of the only place you will see that!!
At 11:58 a.m., Lisa Andel said…
What Rhian said.
Cute poem. Thanks.
At 2:26 p.m., Anonyme said…
The doctor says: "Get plenty of reat, drink plenty of fluids and call me in the morning"
At 5:30 p.m., Joy Renee said…
ah, the misery. it needs no translation.
At 5:54 p.m., Jill said…
Lisa, you are laughing at me too?? And we need to talk about the relationship between you and Rhian!!
Rhet, reat??? What the hell is that? And I need the doctor number!!
Joy, poor you!! It is awfull feeling like this!!
At 6:14 p.m., Rhian said…
Jill - Lisa is my long lost twin sister.
At 9:08 p.m., Susan Helene Gottfried said…
Love it, Jill!
Of course, when I work out too hard, I feel like throwing up instead of embracing life...
At 10:37 p.m., Jill said…
Rhian, that explain a lot of things!!
Make yourself pamper by somebody in that time, Susan!!
At 9:44 a.m., Amy Ruttan said…
You really don't like the cold or colds do ya! I don't like Winter I just like fall.
So believe me I'm not wishing for winter.
At 9:58 a.m., Jill said…
AMy, I have really bad cold, that usualy turn into something worst...
And I do enjoye the snow, but hate the fact that you feel like an icecube even if you have like 3 inch of clothes!!
At 12:52 p.m., Anonyme said…
I meant to say 'rest' not 'reat'.
I am retarded now, remember?
My Skype telphone number is:
biliousity
Go to skype.com and download the free software, get an headset with microphone and I can diagnose your troubles for free no matter where I am in the world.
At 5:17 p.m., Jill said…
How stupid do you think I am, Rhet?? I use to have Skype, but didn't have it now!! And I don't have a headset for my computer!!
But i take your offer for free diagnostic!! What are we gonna do for the treatment??
At 2:13 p.m., Anonyme said…
A cold is an incurable virus affliction. There is nowt I can do for you save alleviate the symproms with placebos and multiple orgasms.
At 5:18 p.m., Jill said…
It won't be needed now, it is almost gone, Rhet!
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